Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by many that in order to challenge the most health problem due to widespread use of

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in man-made

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and reduce the consumption of it by humans it is preferable to increase

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for these

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-containing

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. I strongly agree that

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measure may be effective for solving a problem with health as it will mitigate the availability of

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products

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for most consumers.

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,

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decision must be supported by a set of additional measures,

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as lowering

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for natural

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, including vegetables and fruits, as well as widespread promoting of a healthy lifestyle.

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with, one of the reasons why introducing a «

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tax» may be effective for decreasing the consumption of manufactured

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with

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is that the family budget is usually limited, and there is a list of essential

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as milk and bread, while junk

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is often bought

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.

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the high price of sweets, snacks and drinks will be a kind of restriction in

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intake

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daily.

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, it will contribute not only to decreasing diseases like obesity or diabetes but

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to encourage people to eat more healthy and natural nutrition.

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, these measures of increasing tobacco taxation, passed on to consumers in the form of higher cigarette

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, have been recognized as one of the most effective population-based strategies for decreasing smoking in Kazakhstan for the

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years.

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,

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measure to reduce intake of

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by implementing taxation on it should be as a part of a comprehensive strategy aimed not only at promoting healthy nutrition and lifestyle but

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at raising the affordability of natural fruits and vegetables, which is often not available for the most people due to their high

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. As a consequence,

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may lead to the formation of healthy eating behaviour and redistribution of the family grocery basket, where junk

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will be replaced by fresh fruits and vegetables.

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, farmer markets in Almaty, where local farmers offer their

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at lower

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, are very popular among the local population, which undoubtedly contributes not only to the consumption of healthy

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but

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to an overall healthy lifestyle. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that price incrementation on

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-containing

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should not be overlooked.

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due to the fact that cheap junk

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stimulates to buy more manufacturing

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rather than natural farmer production.

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,

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way of reducing

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intake alone may not be effective and should organize along with other comprehensive measures for forming a healthy nation.