The percentage of obese children in Vietnam has been increasing in recent years. What are the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?
Nowadays, the proportion of obese minors in Vietnam has been on the rise.
This
essay will consider the possible reasons for Linking Words
this
trend as well as the effect it has on these target Linking Words
population
.
Fix the agreement mistake
populations
To begin
with, commercials encouraging children to eat fast foods have been proven to be the major contributing factor to childhood Linking Words
obesity
. Because these youngsters do not have a mature mind of their own, they are easily influenced by television ads encouraging them to eat unhealthy sugary products Use synonyms
such
as candy etc. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
results
of different studies have shown that TV commercials advertising junk meals Correct article usage
the results
is
a major contributor to childhood Change the verb form
are
obesity
. Due to the fact that they consume foods with Use synonyms
high
amount of unwanted sugar and unsaturated fats, it predisposes them to diseases like diabetes, stroke etc.
Correct article usage
a high
Secondly
, the lack of physical activity is another contributing factor to the increasing level of Linking Words
obesity
among youngsters in Vietnam. In recent times, children spend a significant proportion of their day in front of their TV either watching Use synonyms
film
or playing video games as against playing with their peer group, which would help them shed some fats and strengthen their Add an article
a film
bones
. Use synonyms
For instance
, there is a direct link between lack of exercise and Linking Words
obesity
and frail Use synonyms
bones
, as reported by the daily magazine early Use synonyms
this
year. Linking Words
As a result
of Linking Words
this
sedentary lifestyle which is usually accompanied Linking Words
with
high consumption of junk foods, they become inactive and Change preposition
by
this
encourages the formation of weak Linking Words
bones
and they Use synonyms
also
accumulate fat unnecessary.
In conclusion, the rising proportions of children with Linking Words
high fat
content in Vietnam Add a hyphen
high-fat
is
primarily due to the effects of ads Change the verb form
are
which
encourages them to eat Correct pronoun usage
that
unbalanced
diet, and lack Add an article
an unbalanced
of
physical exercise. Whatsoever be the cause, the effects of Change preposition
apply
this
negative Linking Words
behavior
is that it predisposes them to Change the spelling
behaviour
developing
health problems Change the verb form
develop
such
as heart disease, stroke, weak Linking Words
bones
etc.Use synonyms
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