You know what a building company Is planning to build new houses in immediate proximity to your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company.
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to commend your plan to build new houses
just beside my house. Yesterday, I saw an advertisement on the notice board of the society
’s office. Although
the whole construction will last
for more than a year, I’m glad that our society
will have new houses
and more people.
I truly believe that building new houses
has several benefits. Firstly
, we will get additional funds for maintenance from new landlords which will help us in developing the new common areas in the society
like gardens and playgrounds. Second,
the demand for houses
in our area will grow faster which in turn increases the house prices. Lastly
, we will have more society
members to celebrate festivals and various events with, and I believe this
is very important for social well-being.
I also
have a few recommendations for society
management. Since building new houses
will create the problem of not having enough space for parking the vehicles, I am strongly suggesting you plan to expand our current parking space. Additionally
, I suppose you should also
construct the guest parking area as well.
I am very excited to see the construction of new houses
. Please feel free to ask if you require any assistance from my side.
Yours faithfully,
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Task Achievement
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Logical Structure
Your letter has a clear structure, making it easy to follow your arguments and suggestions.
Suitable Writing Tone
You have used a suitable tone for the context, keeping it formal yet friendly.
Complete Response
Your suggestions and recommendations are relevant and well-explained, which meets the task requirements effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite