A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in a computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.
Technological intervention is taking place in every sector
in
our lives, Change preposition
of
therefore
, it places
a vital role in human’s everyday lives Verb problem
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Due to
that, some group
of people Fix the agreement mistake
groups
argued
that living in the modern age has its benefits Wrong verb form
argue
while
some oppose this
view and say that it affects adversely on us. In this
essay, I will discuss both the consequences of technology and derive a conclusion. Firstly
, the invention of computers has been proved a boon for mankind, as it makes our lives smoother than in the past era. Thus
, the majority of people have been depending on such
developed technology like mobile phones and computers since communication becomes effortless with the help of those devices. Besides
of
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apply
it
, radio signals are a foundation of Correct pronoun usage
that
internet
facility which is like Correct article usage
the internet
“ cherry
on Correct article usage
the “ cherry
a
cake”. conversation with our loved Correct article usage
the
once
in a far way distance is the best-fit example of Correct your spelling
ones
this
scenario. Secondly
, it helps to mitigate the burning issue of global warming, because digital storage is playing lion’s share to reduce the usage of paper. Therefore
, data storage and finding records is
convenient for everyone. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
For example
, we have access to our documents across the world. Each coin has two sides, the same as technology has a negative side, too. It is well said that “excessive use of anything is bad”. Thus
, the massive use of digital gadgets brings numerous health issue like cervical problems, since the new generation extensively operate their cell phones which is a root cause for
the pain of the spinal cord. Change preposition
of
For example
, nowadays many youngsters have ‘tech
neck’ problem. In conclusion, Correct article usage
a ‘tech
although
having
advantages Wrong verb form
it has
such
as environment-friendly
and backbone for humans. Add a missing verb
being environment-friendly
However
, its negative side cannot be avoided.Submitted by Ankit on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion