You applied for a new passport, and it got delayed. Due to this delay, you missed your (study) intake. You are very disappointed over this delay. Write a letter to Regional Passport Office for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened and how you are at loss • s say what you wantthe officer to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Nikita, and my

passport

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number is YH75432. I am writing

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letter to show my disappointment regarding the delay caused by your officers in issuing my new

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. The application number is THY67899. Let me elaborate on the situation. I applied for a new

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on 15th April 2021 as the expiration of my old

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was 1st June 2021.

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I had a flight to Canada and I was

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abroad for my

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studies on 3rd July 2021. As per the

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office website, the standard processing time for a new

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is 30 days,

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, in my case, it took more than a month.

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delay caused me to miss the 2021 intake. For

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reason, I would request you to do an investigation on

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matter and share the reason for the delay caused. Lost time would not be compensated by any means but I would like to have an apology letter from your department. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours Faithfully, Nikita

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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178 words

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