QUESTION: SOME EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN TO BEGIN LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL RATHER THAN SECONDARY SCHOOL. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

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According to some experts, it is significantly more beneficial for
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outweigh
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of all, learning a foreign
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gain a great
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 play, or simply counting to ten in front of the
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the young learners' self-esteem. Another advantage is that they do better
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because it improves
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and less time for extra activities like sports.
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till Secondary
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to learn another
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. Studying a foreign
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from primary
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and
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