Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

These days, there has been a heated argument about the usage of the

Internet

by Learners. Some people claim that using the

internet

in the educational field should be limited. From my point of view technology especially, the

internet

meditational process easier than before. I support

this

view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. In the

first

place,

although

the

internet

has some negative effects, it is a very useful tool for the scholastic approach. ,

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it gives the Learners the opportunity to be familiar with technology during studying

time

, it is simply to do two things at one

time

with a single action.

In addition

, the

time

has been saved for many students by using the

internet

,

also

teachers have become more creative in their teaching way.

secondly

, as several things in life young people should be under parents control while using it and

internet

is one of these things.

Nevertheless

, there are several sites that provide educational services

such

as, online books, graphics, quizzes and other different services. The computer world gives us the chance to meet and learn all kinds of knowledge and as a teacher

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want my pupils to experiment with that. Teaching methods have been improved since the involvement of the

internet

. In conclusion,

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strongly believe that the

internet

is a great addition to the educational field despite the other negative aspects. But using

this

tool should be under the guidance of parents and teachers to avoid the wrong use. Students need an intervention to make the education process easy in the

time

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development and science.