Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

Extreme

activities

such

as hang-gliding and mountain climbing are recently embarked by many

individuals

,

as a result

of the pleasure derived from them. In my opinion, these

life threatening

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experiences should not be considered as good because of the

unforseen

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unforeseen

circumstances that can emerge from

it

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them

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.

Individuals

actually venture into these

activities

because of the fun derived from them. The happiness experienced from

such

act

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serves as a relief to some persons, setting their minds off the worries and tragedies of life. To elaborate

further

, every now and

then

you see families, groups or

course mates

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coursemates

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engaging themselves in what is normally termed hiking, just to ease off and have fun without being aware of the negative implication of

such

activities

.

Such

risks should not be welcomed and should be jettisoned with ardour from

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society.

This

is because of the unplanned circumstances that might result from these involvements,

such

as fatal accidents, which can lead to

life threatening

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injuries.

In addition

, dangerous, vigorous and fierce animals can attack these hikers as prey, causing severe harm to their health. An observation made in China indicates that most

individuals

that undertake these journeys come back extremely injured and end up being admitted

in

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hospital

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a hospital

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for expert management. The incredible situation here is that most of these adventurers are often obdurate when advised not to embark on those

activities

because of the satisfaction they derive from

it

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them

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. In conclusion,

individuals

get attracted to these very dangerous acts,

such

as hang-gliding and going up the mountain

as a result

of the contentment gotten from them,

however

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such

experiences are not to be termed good, as they can lead to accidents and hamper healthy living.