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Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Few people like to purchase
commodities
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 made locally rather than buying them which are produced in foreign places. Others more often choose to buy international
items
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 to have a
quality
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 lifestyle. In my perspective, buying
quality
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 and needful
products
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 is more important irrespective of the places they are made.
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 with, a number of people buy
products
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 made in their own country or neighbourhood to avail themselves of some benefits like low cost, no tax, etc. There are a lot of advantages in buying local
commodities
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such
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 as cheap prices, tax benefits, supporting local community development, and many more.
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, there is no guarantee of
quality
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 assurance of
commodities
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 made in local areas.
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, mobile phones made in local sites cannot deliver
quality
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 other than selling them for a lesser cost.
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, manufacturing
products
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 in local places not only help in employment and business but
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 helps in minimizing poverty and the development of the economy of the country.
On the other hand
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, people prefer to buy
commodities
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 made in foreign countries when there is no availability of
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items
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.
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, they like to use
quality
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 and sustainable
products
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, which are made only in remote areas, to showcase high living standards.
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 foreign
items
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 are highly expensive, they come with more guarantees and better services.
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, the Apple iPhone which is believed to be the best mobile phone in the world, exports to many countries due to high demand in the market. To conclude, I usually prefer to buy
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 that are good in
quality
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, durable and sustainable. For me, I would like to purchase only useful
items
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 for a long time from foreign areas while others would buy them from the local neighbourhoods to encourage the development of the businesses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • durability
  • sustainability
  • longevity
  • affordability
  • consumerism
  • waste
  • environmental impact
  • value for money
  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • consumption
  • economic growth
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