A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent times, some persons are of the opinion, and I totally disagree that people's

value

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are judged according to their rank in

the

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society

and material things, while traditional values are no longer essential.

This

essay will explain

further

. On the

one

hand, many equate

one

's rank and social status with their worth.

However

, I do not agree with

this

claim , They are of the suggestion that an individual occupying a high socioeconomic position in the

society

is wealthy than those with a low level.

For example

,

this

can be seen in the Chinese culture, as more respect is given to individuals with a title and lots of investments than a typical commoner.

As a result

of

this

, our basic core values would be lost.

On the other hand

, I do not concur with the

later

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.

This

is because some persons are suffering from the Joneses Syndrome; a phenomenon where people buy things to impress and meet up with others.

For instance

,

this

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effects of trying a achieve a high societal status and possess material things is common among

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minors who are into

cyber crimes

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cybercrimes

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.

As a result

of

this

, judging the fact these persons are wealthy is coming from a wrong point of view. Rather than judge these features as being wealthy,

one

's contribution to the growth of

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society

should

be prioritize

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. In conclusion, despite the fact that some opine that

one

's position in the community and their assets

is

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are

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a yardstick to determine

one

's wealth, I am of the belief that

one

contribution towards the enhancement of

the

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society

is far better.