Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Professionals in science and

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fields are highly valued by modern

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. Many

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, indeed, value them much higher than musicians and

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modern

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. Our modern

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values

scientists

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, doctors and

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experts relatively more than

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artists

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and musicians.

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of the prime reasons for

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perception is based on the efforts required to gain the certification or subject knowledge.

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, the process to get mere admission for higher education in science and

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fields is quite rigorous.

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, once qualified, there is a bright and rewarding career ahead. Because of the above-mentioned reasons, many

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have notions that the experts in science and

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fields are more valued as compared to

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.

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, there is a need to change the perception by considering the contribution of each

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society

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. Musicians and other

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do contribute equally to

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when compared to

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scientists

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is

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of the most important industries nowadays

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since there are cases of escalating stress at work.

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do want to get entertained and relaxed at the end of the hectic working day. Indeed, many

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enjoy spare time by pursuing their hobbies

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as painting and listening or attending

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music concerts. The fact that each

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of us has a hidden artist inside is enough to believe that

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and

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should be equally valued by

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society

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. To sum up, despite

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and

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experts put

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of

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to make human life better,

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do equally contribute to mankind in maintaining the stress levels in these challenging times.