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All parents want the best opportunities fir their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future. Discuss both of sides and give your opinion.

#parents #opportunities #fir #children #people #schools #skills #range #subjects #children’s #future
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The issue of desiring a good chance for
children
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 has become controversial in many parts of the world. For some people,
schools
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 have to teach
children
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 specific
abilities
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,
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, for others teach the line of
subjects
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 is better for a
children
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’s feature. I personally maintain that there is strong evidence to justify the former view. Some people put forward the argument that their
children
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 ought to study not just a range of
subjects
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 while
schools
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 have to educate
children
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abilities
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. The most compelling reason justifying their assertion is that learning
skills
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 from childhood
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is better because young people’s memory and their ability to understand is high so learning
abilities
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 from childhood. Others,
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, criticize the idea on the assumption that teaching a specific subject of their
children
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’s interest helps them develop their
skills
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 in the best way possible.
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 the child can easily master the subject of their interest at a younger age and
children
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 can score better grades if they start learning the
subjects
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 of their liking.
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 is primarily because choosing a subject in which the child is interested or talented, is considered more beneficial by some parents. Apparently, if young people study talents or
abilities
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, they will much more intelligent than
children
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 who do not study
skills
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.
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 to say, a child may be interested in becoming a doctor or painter. Everyone should have
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 understanding of math, science, geography, history and literature to be able to succeed in life.
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,
children
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 should learn all
subjects
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 and
abilities
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 at school. To conclude, while is vital to acknowledge that parents desire the best for their
children
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 and
schools
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 can play an important role
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 it.
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 both
skills
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 and
subjects
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 are necessary for students to support their occupation and life in the future but
schools
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 need to spend more time on teaching
skills
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.
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