Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together. others disagree, claiming that the internet has made people more isolated . Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated that whether
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made society a close-Knit or confined in their own sphere. General perception propagates that, the online network assists individuals to be in a close connection, while other section of society asserts that, it has
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seclusion.
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the electronic network plays a crucial role in bolstering the rapports of individuals regardless of their country of origin and dwelling place. The central reason behind
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of social websites owing to the presence of online connectivity with the support of internet.
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close surveillance down to
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upper hand over others. Ergo, it is conclusively clear that,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • E-commerce
  • Consumer behavior
  • Virtual marketplace
  • Cybersecurity
  • Digital footprint
  • Return policy
  • Comparison shopping
  • Customer reviews
  • Retail therapy
  • Logistics
  • User interface
  • Payment gateway
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