Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

These days,

crime

becomes a major

issue

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is increasing day by day. There are

a

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several reasons

of

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for

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the growing number of

crime

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criminal

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actions.

Although

the governments set

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set

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many regulations to reduce committing

crime

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a crime

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, the reason why

people

do that

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countless.

This

essay will discuss both the causes and the steps which are should be taken to hold the high rate of criminal actions.

To begin

with, it is commonly believed that poverty is the

first

reason

of

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committing

the

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crime

, so the low income of

people

will

rise

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raise

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the rate of

crime

.

Second

, the use of alcohol and drugs bring a huge impact

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criminal activities.

Furthermore

, social problems play a major role

such

as

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violence, divorce and illiteracy. Because of the absence of education, young

people

cannot have the right way to live decently and eventually they will commit a

crime

. The best way is to tackle

this

issue

are, governments should set new criminal laws to decrease the percentage of criminal actions.

In addition

, increasing employment opportunities would improve

living

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level

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for the citizens. Social institutions have a massive role to solve

this

issue

for

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instance, they should raise awareness and work to have

healthy

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Society.

However

, it is difficult to prevent alcohol and drugs totally, but limiting them will help to deal with

this

issue

. In conclusion, governments should start to find solutions to reduce the rate of

crime

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criminal

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activities by providing better life and education for

people

.

Also

,

law

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is very important to adjust nations in order to live happily.