14. People have little understanding of the important of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world.

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human negligence is the main cause of

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gases that

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nitrous oxide level in

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nature should be taught to

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and motives them to lesser usage of petroleum and coal .

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way to maintains the ecological balance .

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the natural habitat of

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world

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behaviour of man.To make

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safer and longer ,it makes

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of both citizens and regimes .

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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