some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss this views and give your own opinion.

While some persons would argue that the primary cause of our environmental problem in recent times is the
extinction
of some
plants
and animals species, others are of the claim, and I totally concur, that there are other trivial factors causing
this
trend.
This
essay will explain
further
. On the one hand, the loss of a particular species of plant and animal are the major causes of our environmental downturns, as proposed by some individuals.
However
, I do not agree with their suggestion. They are of the opinion that while
plants
utilize carbon dioxide from the atmosphere for photosynthesis, thereby reducing the
effects
of global warming, the decrease in their
number
would adversely affect our environment.
For example
, results from different studies have shown that the preservation of
plants
can help decrease the
effects
of global warming significantly.
Additionally
, the
extinction
of some insects which helps to pollinate some
plants
. to illustrate , the hunting of bees for honey would lead to their
extinction
and its
effects
would be greatly felt on the pollination for almond and apple.Due to the fact that their
extinction
alongside those of their pollinators (insects) would increase the
effects
of climate change, they are of the belief that their decline is the main contributing factor to our environmental issues.
On the other hand
, some persons would argue, and I agree, that the major cause of
this
trend is an increase in the
number
of car ownership.
This
is so because a significant proportion of these vehicles burn fossil fuel and in turn releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and
this
causes climatic change. According to daily times' magazine, the
effects
of global warming have risen by 10 per cent in the
last
decade, due to the increase in the
number
of individuals owning an automobile. Due to the fact that we have more persons commuting themselves from one place to the other with their individual cars, I am of the claim that
this
is the primary cause of
this
trend. In conclusion,
although
the loss of some
plants
and animal species can affect our environment negatively, as some people would propose, I do not agree with
this
statement.
However
, I am of the opinion that the rise in the
number
of privately owned cars is the major contributor to our problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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