online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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it makes enormous facilitates. Change the wording
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People
may save time due to internet
for shopping Correct article usage
the internet
such
as clothes, groceries etc. In my opinion, it has both imperative and detrimental effect
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people
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On the one hand, it is more beneficial for consumers because it is less time consuming and Correct your spelling
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tremendous of selection , when Change the verb form
gives
people
buy product
online. Add an article
the product
a product
For instance
, online sites provide cheaper rates and customer review
on their portal and nowadays cash Fix the agreement mistake
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also
possible and when if you did not like items than
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then
people
could easy
return or get their money back easily. Change the adjective
easily
As a result
, it is enhance
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enhances
convenient
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convenience
masses
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the masses
In addition
, people
get their order on door
, Add an article
the door
thus
they do not have to outside for shopping.
On the other hand
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on trend
, sometimes Add a hyphen
on-trend
people
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something and they get different products. Correct your spelling
order
Moreover
, it also
gives deleterious
impact on local shoppers due to Correct article usage
a deleterious
incresing
competition. Correct your spelling
increasing
For instance
, most of
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folks
buy things online and did not prefer to buy from Add an article
the folks
local
market. Add an article
the local
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seller
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sellers
be suffer
from loss of business. Change the verb form
be suffering
Although
because online shopping is facilitate
and cheaper, Change the verb form
is facilitated
people
tend to buy too much, which would lead to a large waste of money. This
is less likely to happen if shopping store is more popular.
To conclude, online shopping is more convenient than physical stores. However
, it has both positive and negative development.Submitted by kajavadarapiyush786 on
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