online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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it makes enormous facilitates.

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may save time due to

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for shopping

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as clothes, groceries etc. In my opinion, it has both imperative and detrimental

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will discuss both positive or negative development in

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paragraphs. On the one hand, it is more beneficial for consumers because it is less time consuming and

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tremendous of selection , when

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buy

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online.

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, online sites provide cheaper rates and customer

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on their portal and nowadays cash

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possible and when if you did not like items

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people

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return or get their money back easily.

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people

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get their order on

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they do not have to outside for shopping.

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some darker side

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available which we can not

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something and they get different products.

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impact on local shoppers due to

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folks

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buy things online and did not prefer to buy from

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market.

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offline

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from loss of business.

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because online shopping

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and cheaper,

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tend to buy too much, which would lead to a large waste of money.

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is less likely to happen if shopping store is more popular. To conclude, online shopping is more convenient than physical stores.

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, it has both positive and negative development.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

274 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

landscape of retail
digital purchasing platforms
enhanced accessibility
mobility issues
competitive prices
brick-and-mortar stores
vibrant local economies
packaging waste
carbon footprint
social cohesion
community engagement

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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