Some people argue that children more often do physical activities while sparing less time for studying? To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Studying is an integral part of our school life. It is boring for some of us, enjoyable for others. Some people consider that youth devote more time to physical activity rather than studying their

subjects

. Contrary to them, I think youth need to learn

subjects

correctly so they have to spend more time

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study

.

Firstly

, in order that

children

earn some basic achievements,

subjects

are prepared sequentially. So studying enables them to have some abilities and skills.

For example

, individuals that used to

study

more, can think more analytically and interpret what they read more easily compared to their peers.

In addition

, they become more aware of facts about

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life and

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nature, as well as more assertive as long as they properly learn given

subjects

and new knowledge.

Secondly

,

although

doing physical activity is not as important as studying, it positively

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study

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performance of

children

. It helps their brain to become more healthy and more relaxed whether

this

is fitness or specific sport

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branches

branch

. It

also

stimulates their mental health. Mentally relaxed

children

are able to focus on their

subjects

even though they are immensely difficult and complex.

Therefore

, they eagerly want to learn much more

subject

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and their

study

performance substantially increases.

For example

,

children

engaged in a sport are more successful in school

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than

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others. In conclusion,

study

influence

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our cognitive skills being beneficial in our life. These range from thinking analytically

and

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ability

of

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reading and writing. So youth have to spend much more time

to

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study

.

However

, they do not neglect to do physical activity. Because it is helpful to

study

performance.