in most of the countries, people prefer to live in rented appartment rather than buying a home? what are the advantages and disadvantages of iving in rented accomodation?

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Nowadays,
people
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prefer to live in their own home because it gives
jubilent
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jubilant
feelings.
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some
people
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live in some
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area
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areas
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for less
time
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;
hence
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, they prefer to live in rented homes rather than buying
flat
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. In
this
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essay, I will explain both merits and demerits of rented
accomodation
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accommodation
. Focusing on the merits, there are some
people
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who merely have to stay for
short
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a short
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time
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at that place, that
time
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they prefer to live in rented flat.
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, if any employee gets project outside of
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then
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company always premise on rented
accomodation
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accommodation
because purchasing homes for
shorter
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time
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is expensive for them.
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,
fer
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for
people
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who do
goverments
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governments
government
job and they have to change their location due to promotion.
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, they could not buy homes in every state and rented appliances in
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a better
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option for them rather than spending
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an enormous
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amount to purchasing. There
are
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also
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some detrimental
impact
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impacts
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.
Firstly
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,
people
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have to obey
restrication
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restriction
restrictions
towards their
owner
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and they could not do something without landlords' permission. To illustrate, if
people
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want to repaint
wall
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a wall
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they did not like but without
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owner
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the owner
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permission
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they can not repaint it.
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, they have to follow rules and
regulation
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according to
house
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the house
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owner
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.
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, sometimes masses have healthy
realtionships
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relationships
with their friends and relatives but as their
owner
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did not
allows
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to
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them to
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invite them
then
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it would be
worst
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the worst
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situation for them. To conclude, rented
accomodation
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accommodation
is always prestigious for them who lives short
terms
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in
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particular
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a particular
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area
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;
however
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, if
people
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have
plan
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to live longer at that
area
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than purchasing
home
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a home
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is
better
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a better
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option for their family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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