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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, visual
sources
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 of
news
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 like TV shows or
newspapers
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 or rarely used by youngsters to cope with everyday updates. The current case is a result of several conditions that will be discussed in
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 essay and some suggested solutions will be proposed.
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 with,
newspapers
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 and television shows become untrusted
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 of
news
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 for young people.
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, most of the mentioned
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 are having direct and indirect control by the government, so the published information
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 mostly directing the citizens to the path planned by high authorities.
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, visual and paper
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 cannot be accessed at any time.
On the contrary
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, other
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 like
news
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 websites are available at any time and wherever they go.
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, there are different ways to overcome the rare use of physical and visual
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 of
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. One of the suggestions is that the government member must give more freedom to the
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 organization and TV show teams to discuss what is really happening around us.
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, they must include the new generations in their plans and consider their opinions. Another suggestion is to increase distribution points for
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.
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, they need to be available in the
yougth
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youth
 places of interest,
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 as clubs, markets, universities and parks. to conclude,
newspapers
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 and other visual new
sources
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 are now listen twisting for the teenagers and youngsters due to some Miss planning from some governmental systems. Suggestions mentioned may help to overcome
this
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 issue.
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