In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, visual
sources
of news
like TV shows or newspapers
or rarely used by youngsters to cope with everyday updates. The current case is a result of several conditions that will be discussed in this
essay and some suggested solutions will be proposed.
To begin
with, newspapers
and television shows become untrusted sources
of news
for young people. In other words
, most of the mentioned sources
are having direct and indirect control by the government, so the published information are
mostly directing the citizens to the path planned by high authorities. Change the verb form
is
In addition
, visual and paper sources
cannot be accessed at any time. On the contrary
, other sources
like news
websites are available at any time and wherever they go.
However
, there are different ways to overcome the rare use of physical and visual sources
of news
. One of the suggestions is that the government member must give more freedom to the news
organization and TV show teams to discuss what is really happening around us. Moreover
, they must include the new generations in their plans and consider their opinions. Another suggestion is to increase distribution points for newspapers
. For example
, they need to be available in the yougth
places of interest, Correct your spelling
youth
such
as clubs, markets, universities and parks.
to conclude, newspapers
and other visual new sources
are now listen twisting for the teenagers and youngsters due to some Miss planning from some governmental systems. Suggestions mentioned may help to overcome this
issue.Submitted by yahyagamal2010 on
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