Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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crime

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worldwide issue and

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the past decade, the percentage of

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crime

is increased significantly.

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discase

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discuss

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the reasons

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the

crime

and how to limit and the

increasing

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increase

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of the

crime

rate

. The reasons behind the illegal activities are countless and in

this

part

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the essay will show some of them.

First

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reason is

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poverty

. Many

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types of research

pieces of research

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support the idea that the relation between

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crime

and

poverty

is positive relation which means that when the

poverty

rate

increased the

crime

rate

is increased

also

. Another reason is peer pressure.

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pressure

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a huge impact on

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individual activity, so

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whenever

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when ever

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whenever

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the person have

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bad company, he definitely going to change his activity to fit with them. The

last

reason is

use

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the use

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of drugs. The use of illegal drugs definitely leads to illegal activities,

such

as stealing and killing.

On the other hand

, there are many solutions to limit the

crime

rate

.

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solution for the

crime

is that the

governments

should prevent

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poverty

by providing more education facilities and aid to the

people

who under the

poverty

line. The more

people

get education and support from the

governments

the

crime

rate

will

decreased

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. Another solution is that the

governments

should put

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severe

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sever

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severe

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punishments

of

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on

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anyone that do a

crime

. The

sever

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severe

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the

punished

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punishment

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is, the low of

people

do the

crime

. To sum up, the

crime

and illegal activities

rate

rase a lot

on

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in

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the

last

years, the probable reasons

of

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for

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the

crime

are

poverty

, peer pressure effect, and use of drugs. While

,

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the likely solving

of

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it

are

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is

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the

governments

aid for the plover

people

and the

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severe

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sever

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severe

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punishments from the

governments

.