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You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. invite your friend for the exhibition.

#photography #competition #photo #exhibition #friend
Dear Ranveer, Hope
this
 letter will found you in a good condition. I have
a very good news
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 to share with you
i
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I
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 won
first
 prize in a photography competition and
this
 photograph is going to be displayed in an exhibition
i
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 would love
if
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it if
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 you will join me in
this
 exhibition, You know about my photography passion and you know my sister gifted me canon
macera
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Macera
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 four years ago and
i
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 have collected so many natural pictures of birds and other
creature
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creatures
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.
last
 month
i
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 went to my uncle house and there was having a competition for an NG0 so
i
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 participated and won
first
 prize
with
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 the amount of $10000 and
next
 month the exhibition held on
15th
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the 15th
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 of
july
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July
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 on 1989
pandosy
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pansy
 st and the prize is $15000
i
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 would love if you join me in
this
 beautiful movement. It would be
greate
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great
 fun.
your
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 lovingly,
lovedeep
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love deep
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