Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future.Such as those related to science and technology.

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have a lot of subject
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to carry out their
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people think
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their own.
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, numerous believe they be going to allow studying technical and science-related
subjects
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future
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to elect whatever subject they would like to
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students would show more interest and that help to carry out
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future
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to
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tourism as he or she is interested in roaming around and like to choose one of the
subjects
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they can compose their passion, the
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of
study
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technology
are the most popular
study
subjects
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to
study
in universities. There are always new development and experiment to compose things better. Like space
research
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vehicles, always need more progress in design and new features.
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who
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science and
technology
can contribute to modern
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useful in the
future
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scientist
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and
technology
prone. These skills can contribute to large futuristic
technology
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also
open ways for multiple-
choice
and interests. Ultimately most of the
research
depended on technical
research
and graduate should encourage to contribute more by choosing these
subjects
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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