News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Daily, we a lot more journalists backing up their publications with photographs. While some are of the opinion that the use of
images
leaves a long-lasting effect as opposed to
words
, others
however
disagree.
This
essay will discuss why
pictures
might be a way to spread
information
, but why I strongly believe
pictures
also
need
words
. In recent times, the appreciation and use of photography for various purposes
has
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become increasingly popular.
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inclusive. the popular saying, "a picture speaks a thousand
words
" has proven to be somewhat
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accurate
as people almost never forget
images
they view. Research shows that more people retain
informations
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that have photos attached to them.
This
is because
,
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thy
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are easier to remember and more interesting to read.
For example
, all children's books have
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images
for a purpose.
This
is to help them concentrate while reading
,
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and
also
to accurately re-iterate
this
information
in their own understanding when asked. It will be
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rather callous to undermine the importance of
pictures
in
information
dissemination.
However
, we cannot circulate
images
without attaching an explanation to
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.
This
can be very dangerous and might spread false news. When viewing a photograph, everyone can understand and
interprete
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interpret
it
differntly
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differently
.
For example
, imagine if only
pictures
from the 911 attack were circulated with no context. Would
this
not have caused more fear and panic? Every picture
that is
published in the news should be well explained by the photographer. In conclusion,
although
using
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pictures
picture
as a tool for sharing
information
is effective, I am of the opinion that every photo needs
words
.
This
helps to limit the spread of false details.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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