News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Daily, we a lot more journalists backing up their publications with photographs. While some are of the opinion that the use of

images

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leaves a long-lasting effect as opposed to

words

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, others

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disagree.

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essay will discuss why

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might be a way to spread

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, but why I strongly believe

pictures

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also

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need

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. In recent times, the appreciation and use of photography for various purposes

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become increasingly popular.

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dissemination

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inclusive. the popular saying, "a picture speaks a thousand

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" has proven to be somewhat

acurate

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accurate

as people almost never forget

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they view. Research shows that more people retain

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information

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that have photos attached to them.

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is because

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thy

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are easier to remember and more interesting to read.

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, all children's books have

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for a purpose.

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is to help them concentrate while reading

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and

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to accurately re-iterate

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in their own understanding when asked. It will be

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rather callous to undermine the importance of

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information

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dissemination.

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, we cannot circulate

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without attaching an explanation to

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can be very dangerous and might spread false news. When viewing a photograph, everyone can understand and

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interpret

differntly

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differently

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, imagine if only

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from the 911 attack were circulated with no context. Would

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not have caused more fear and panic? Every picture

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published in the news should be well explained by the photographer. In conclusion,

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using

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pictures

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as a tool for sharing

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is effective, I am of the opinion that every photo needs

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helps to limit the spread of false details.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

274 words

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irrefutable evidence
transcend language barriers
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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save their money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?