Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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It is widely noted that the governments of the poorer society have the responsibility to look after their citizens but they do not always have the ability to do so.
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is one of the main reasons why wealthy
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not only should but have to be required to share their wealth among the poorer land by providing things
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as food and education. As a common man, we are obligated to help our kind with whatever we can and with the best of our abilities.
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, It is every person's right to have schooling and we should not let the crowd die from starvation.
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, It is inhumane to leave
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living in
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poor situations, which are occurred due to the negligence of Governments. For
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people
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to have enough food and sufficient education, more aid is needed from wealthy
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.
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, lesser developed African countries
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as Kenya have thousands of families starving and many
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do not have an education.
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, some public thinks that every government should look for its own
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and should not rely on wealthier
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.
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, it may be due to a fear that, if wealthier countries help poorer countries they will get used to being helped and won't develop themselves, but
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wealthier
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could help the poor governments with ideas on how to improve their nation's quality of life.
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, it is a common belief that the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. In conclusion, both wealthy and poor
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should do their best for their population. Let's hope that in the future there will be more help from wealthy society, so all communities live normally with enough food to eat, good health and sufficient schooling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
  • dependency
  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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