Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

It is widely noted that the governments of the poorer society have the responsibility to look after their citizens but they do not always have the ability to do so.
This
is one of the main reasons why wealthy
nations
not only should but have to be required to share their wealth among the poorer land by providing things
such
as food and education. As a common man, we are obligated to help our kind with whatever we can and with the best of our abilities.
Moreover
, It is every person's right to have schooling and we should not let the crowd die from starvation.
However
, It is inhumane to leave
people
living in
such
poor situations, which are occurred due to the negligence of Governments. For
such
people
to have enough food and sufficient education, more aid is needed from wealthy
nations
.
For example
, lesser developed African countries
such
as Kenya have thousands of families starving and many
people
do not have an education.
On the other hand
, some public thinks that every government should look for its own
people
and should not rely on wealthier
nations
.
Furthermore
, it may be due to a fear that, if wealthier countries help poorer countries they will get used to being helped and won't develop themselves, but
then
wealthier
nations
could help the poor governments with ideas on how to improve their nation's quality of life.
For instance
, it is a common belief that the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. In conclusion, both wealthy and poor
nations
should do their best for their population. Let's hope that in the future there will be more help from wealthy society, so all communities live normally with enough food to eat, good health and sufficient schooling.
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  • interconnected
  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
  • dependency
  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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