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Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.

#people #school #news #waste #time
The bar graph elucidates the
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 level of employees working eight different jobs. The pie chart illustrates diseases which
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 caused by
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. At a cursory glance, it is clearly seen that amount of
stress
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comparatively
 lower in salaried professionals than
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. The major striking point here is that
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businessmen
 witnessed the top level of
stress
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lectures
lecturers
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 stood at the bottom with
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second
 position in the given
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categories
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exactly
 60%, followed by doctors, and writers. Both of them had
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 ranging nearly between 40% to 50% Regarding
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 illnesses,
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 are highly affected by
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health
 issues with one-fourth of
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 figure, and with 18% and 15% film producers and doctors remained in the
next
 two positions. Interestingly only 5% of presenters are suffered
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 disorders. Remaining positions;
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lawyers
 and writers: 8% and chef and
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business
 men are nearly 10.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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