Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.

The bar graph elucidates the
stress
level of employees working eight different jobs. The pie chart illustrates diseases which
was
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were

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caused by
stress
. At a cursory glance, it is clearly seen that amount of
stress
is
comparetively
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lower in salaried professionals than
self employed
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. The major striking point here is that
businesmen
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businessmen

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witnessed the top level of
stress
with 70 vt while
lecturees
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lectures
lecturers
lecturer

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stood at the bottom with
one
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third
of the businessmens’ figure. Movie producers who secured
second
position in the given
catagories
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categories

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wwith
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exactily
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60%, followed by doctors, and writers. Both of them had
stress
level
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levels

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ranging nearly between 40% to 50% Regarding
stress causing
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stress-causing

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illnesses,
lecture
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lectures

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are highly affected by
shealth
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health

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issues with one-fourth of
total
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the total

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figure, and with 18% and 15% film producers and doctors remained in the
next
two positions. Interestingly only 5% of presenters are suffered
by
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stress
disorders. Remaining positions;
loweyers
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lawyers

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and writers: 8% and chef and
buiness
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men are nearly 10.
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