living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree or disagree

Immigration is constantly
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. It is undeniable that people migrate to developed countries to improve their standard of living or getting higher education. I support
this
statement that speaking an overseas
language
in a foreign territory create serious issues in practical life. By analysing that people faced difficulty in socialising and getting employment have proven
this
. Let`s begin by looking at communication problems that arise on moving to a foreign state.
For instance
, many Pakistani students go abroad for having professional degrees to build their
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. But unfortunately unfamiliar with the mother tongue of the outside nation cause serious social issue
such
as they are not able to convey their message in a proper way.
In addition
, unable to communicate with other students make them alone, frustrated and homesick.
Secondly
, it is commonly seen that a number of society
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migrate to other countries to explore employment opportunities.
Although
, it is noticeable that people always face trouble in getting
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of work in an overseas country. Take
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example of an underdeveloped country community that travel to developed states for work to acquire high salaries . But sadly it creates complications for them
such
as
first
they have to learn
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for having a piece of work.
Furthermore
, they can not stand for the violation of their rights because they are unable to understand
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and regulations of that country written in their own
language
. To summarise, unknown
language
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communication and have a negative impact on practical life. It is extremely recommended to take
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language
course before making a plan to move abroad to improve lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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