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living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree or disagree

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Immigration is constantly on
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rise
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. It is undeniable that many people migrate to developed countries to improve their standard of living or getting higher education. I support
this
 statement that speaking an overseas
language
 in a foreign territory creates serious issues in practical life. By analyzing, that people faced difficulty in socializing and getting employment has proven
this
. Let`s begin by looking at communication problems that arise on moving to a foreign state.
For instance
, many Pakistani students go abroad for having professional degrees to build their
career
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. But unfortunately unfamiliar with the mother tongue of the outside nation cause serious social matters
such
 as they are not able to communicate with other students and convey their message in a proper way leads to a tough situation to make friends.
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, no one present to share problems
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 them alone, frustrated and homesick.
Secondly
, it is commonly seen that a number of society members migrate to other countries to explore employment opportunities.
Although
, it is noticeable that people always face trouble in getting a piece of work in an overseas country. Take an example of an underdeveloped community that travel to developed states for work to acquire high salaries. But sadly it creates complications for them
such
 as
first
 they have to learn a
language
 to obtain a piece of work.
Furthermore
, they cannot stand for the violation of their rights because they are unable to understand the rules and regulations of that country written in their own
language
. To summarize,
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language
 is a great barrier to socialize and have a negative impact on practical life. It is extremely recommended to take a foreign
language
 course before making a plan to move abroad to improve lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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