Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Contemporarily, commercial

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is considered as stimulating us to purchase merchandise that

are

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unnecessary,

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other buyers claim that advertising helps us perceive a variety of useful stuff. I would contend that the main ambition of

advertise

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advertising

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is that may enhance our

live style

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lifestyle

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. Advertising

lead

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leads

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us to

the

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modern life with

variety

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of merchandise to get rid of the old odds. As the advertise commonly exist on the Internet and even

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on TV

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, which

is boosts

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the product to be more

popular

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. Not only

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the advertising agency bombard the media, but

also

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dominate

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our awareness.

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, thanks to the vape

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early

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2000s. That

make

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means

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vaping

save

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saves

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millions from

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cancer. To advertise the products the company gets to be aware of how much the world’s technology is developing. To be more specific, Because of the revolution, our life has changed day by day.

The customers

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Customers

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get to know more about how the world has developed

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through

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all the advertisements

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mass media. The more we have

acknowledge

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about

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technology the more we have diverse life-changing inventions.

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the development, we have to be thankful for the invention of AI. The customers who

buying

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buy

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goods via

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social media.

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a miracle way that many

agency

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agencies

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of advertising can use all of the famous platforms

such

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as Instagram, Facebook, Twitter,

ect

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etc

. On the one hand, it is likely that

advertise

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

342 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
well-being

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree with this view? Give your opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be down about this problem?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?