The proportion of elderly people in some societies is increasing rapidly.Do you think the negative effect of such trend outweigh the positive effect?

These days, the

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of older people is rising rapidly in some countries. In my opinion, the negative

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trend outweigh the positive

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essay, I will explain why. On one hand, the

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population makes

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contributions to their communities, because a number of the elderly engages in voluntary work after

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. In fact, values nurtured by voluntary work,

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as solidarity, reciprocity, mutual trust, belonging and empowerment, contribute significantly to the well-being of the citizens and communities.

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, some volunteer programs assign older volunteers who serve as efficient tutors by making use of their experience to

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, which helps to connect them with others, develop

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, and improve school functioning, all of which are essential for the individual and community well-being.

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, an increasing number of the elderly places a greater burden on

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system, because the elderly generally experience chronic diseases,

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as cancer, diabetes, and cardiovascular diseases. Specifically,

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the elderly, who are treated for chronic diseases that are rarely cured completely, account for a greater

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of the population, a huge amount of

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provision and expenditure in hospitals is spent on those people, which causes

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costs to increase. What is more, the higher

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older people and declining fertility rate cause the workforce to decrease, which results in

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wage inflation that leads to a rise in the cost of living

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As we have seen, the higher

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of the elderly have both positive and negative

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on a broader range of areas, from the

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system to the economy, so I believe that

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trend outweigh the positive

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