it is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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reading become less popular among children, there are several reasons
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I not only elaborate it but
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some causes for that ,
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and foremost one ,current age child is deeply connected hi-technology,
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as computers and cellular phone, so that they spent more
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on that which distract them from cognitive skill like exploring a new book by reading.
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, a survey in Canada reveals that 70% of school students spent 6.5 hours per day with trendy gadgets.
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, they do not have enough knowledge about the benefits of reading in their upcoming days, due to that they neglect it. Child minds are like grey clay, anyone can easily mould it whatever shape they like, so if parents and teachers take some primitive steps that it is easy to get them in the reading phase.
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they can develop the hobby of reading in that
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for that caretaker should give some instruction of impotency of the reading. Apart from that, school authorities could be arranged seminars for the betterment reading of children and give chance to students to understanding the vital role of reading in their future. To illustrate it, USA each school set two seminars of reading in each semester. To conclude, the reading trend is a decline in teenagers because of more involvement in technology and not aware of the plus point of reading.
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parents and mentors can influence them towards reading by proper guidelines.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelming presence
  • auditory stimulation
  • imagination
  • concentration
  • digital content
  • role models
  • captivate
  • e-books
  • interactive reading apps
  • positive reinforcement
  • gamify
  • communal engagement
  • personalized reading recommendations
  • foster
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