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computers are being used more and more in education.discuss the advantages and disadvantages

#computers #education
In the contemporary era, technologies are playing
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essential
 role in
education
. Indeed, most educational institutes
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 online learning program so learning not be restricted with
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 campus.
This
 technology development has some advantages and drawbacks which I discuss in detail in
this
 essay. There are many key benefits stemming from the use of technologies in
educational
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First
 and foremost,
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accessibility
 of educational
content
 as there is no need to go to physical school or
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university
 for
education
.
For instance
,
students
 can
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attend
 their class from home using zoom or skype or any other advisable tool.
Secondly
,
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 of
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range
 of
content
 representation tools
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 study enjoyable and more attractive than past.
For instance
, video graphics, audio
content
, and educational games
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 study not only enjoyable but
also
 memorable.
Therefore
,
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computers
composers
 are
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 of delivery of quality
education
 anywhere and anytime. There are,
however
, many drawbacks associated with increasing
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reliance
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computer
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 in
education
.
First
, as all classes
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 online there would be
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 social gathering of
students
 with each
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 and their teacher.
For instance
, during the class
students
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students
 are doing their own work
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instant
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happening
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In addition
 to
this
,
students
also
 can
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easily
 perform cheating during the test and do
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plagiarism
. As there
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 less supervision during
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 exam and online assignment submission
students
 can easily copy others work and submit and there are no tools to identify
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plagiarism
.So, these disadvantages
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 to
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 computer in
education
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 context. In conclusion,
although
 there are lots of disadvantages of incorporating
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 in
education
. Despite
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this
, it is essential to deliver quality
content
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respect
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location and time.
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