The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

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depression and lower self-esteem. Another point to consider is that the level of crime committed by the youngsters would rapidly grow

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. Even when young people are told not to get involved in trouble, they are good at coping with what they see and hear. To counteract these dangers, perhaps the most immediate solution would be for the government to take

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. Another remedy might be the parent’s attention and family relationship among the members. Some parents should consider spending more time with their

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, teaching them the difference between right and incorrect actions, so that they may possibly be protected from the

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. The key solution would be the policy taken by the government and the responsibility of the parents.