In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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they want to live in there. It is very important in my country because we are religious
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research history about they want to buy a
house
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we live in there.
Firstly
, you should need to know about
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house
If you have a religion. Because believing the god
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have a lot of movies, you can watch these.
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earth huge numbers of
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not religious it is not important.
Secondly
,
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is
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price so we must to look how it is second and bas parts. If it is not good and
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sell like buy price.
However
, there are still
people
who do not care how good or bad it is, but they fix it. Turning to possible alternatives, probably the big
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would be to improve the value of life. Today, real
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of important things in our
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a best.
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about that building’s story. And we can look from
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. It would save us the time.
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of buying something
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, one day.
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it is important to pay attention to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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