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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

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 matter of growing issue for the International community. It is often reported that less sleep has bad far-reaching consequences for individuals.
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 it brings for the feature. One main factor causing
people
 to less sleep family responsibilities. Some
people
 oldest in family, they are responsible to earn and provide for the family so they do more that one job which may work until the night.
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, in developing countries, it is commonly popular for
people
 to work in taxi services after their usual office work
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 earn additional income.
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, many cities suffer from traffic congestions in the morning and at
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 when everyone is in a hurry, so
people
 must wake up earlier and leave their house in order to avoid stuck in traffic. The effects of less sleep can be extremely harmful.
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 it could lead to ill health. The human body needs to sleep more than seven to eight hours because of being
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 and energy. If
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 sleep not enough
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 might suffer from mental health problems. Based on the findings that (
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people
 who stay up late are could
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 memory.
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, not enough sleep lead to high-stress level and them difficult to find time for fun with family members or friends. To conclude, many
people
 do not sleep enough because they need to make a living and want to start their day early.
As a result
, not only their health is affected but
also
 their relationships.
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