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students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources( such as internet and television). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days,
students
 have ample ways to learn their study subjects
such
 as from the lectures,
internet
 and television. Some critics point out that new advance technological sources are more reliable than traditional ways of learning.
However
, I believe that still teaching in the classroom is the most effective method of learning for pupils.
Internet
 and television are boons for the education sector.
Students
 can get information from various sources including youtube, applications, tv programs and many more. The root advantage of
this
 way of learning is that pupils are able to learn from anywhere and anytime. There are no more geological boundaries. Distance learning is a great example of it. Apart from
this
, having
such
 a wide range of material on a single concept help student to gain a better understanding on a subject, whereas teachers or professors in classrooms might not have broad knowledge on every topic. In fact, sometimes, they are
also
 bounded by time limits.
On the other hand
, traditional teaching is still popular among society because of the tremendous benefits it serves them. For one
such
 thing, face to face communication always more effective as well as easy to remember than a digital one.
Moreover
,
students
 can ask questions to their teachers in order to clear their doubts, which is not possible in online learning. Maths problems,
for instance
, are hard to understand by ownself and it needs proper explanation. Not only
this
, different way of teaching methods on the
internet
 or a TV might make pupils more confuse.
Thus
, guidance is a must for tender age. Guidance plays an important role in a child's life. Not every source on a TV or the
internet
 is reliable. Sources are not proven by responsible authorities, which, sometimes, misguide them. Nowadays, many people post videos of a particular subject without proper knowledge only for their selfish purposes including money and fame. In recapitulation,
Although
 the digital world has enormous positives for
students
, it is a good idea to mix digital technology with the traditional one. I believe that it gives a tremendous impact on study methods.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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