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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter •Tell them why you need to move the interview time •Ask to change the interview date •Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

Respected sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you
about
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that
i
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I
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 will not attend the
interview
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 on the scheduled date
My self
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Self
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 Yyz Patil and
i
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I
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was
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 selected for the face-to-face
interview
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 for the quality officer position. My
interview
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 is supposed to at Sunday 24 September.But unfortunately, I will not be able to attend it because I
got
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 an accident
last
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 night and the doctor advised me to rest for 2 weeks. I request you to change the
interview
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 date to
the
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10 November as it is a minor injury and the medical staff advised that you will be fully fit during
this
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 time.
Furthermore
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, I am still interested in
this
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 position because I have related experience in the quality field and my master's degree in quality assurance
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 more value to it.
Moreover
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,
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 like your company's vision and mission which are good for me
as well as
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 my personal development. I hope you understand my situation and give me positive feedback as soon as possible. The medical reports and doctor certificates are attached to the letters. With regards, Yyz Patil

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suitable writing tone
Ensure the letter maintains a professional tone throughout by avoiding overly casual language and using full sentences to articulate ideas.
logical structure
Consider adding a brief sentence at the end of each paragraph to link it smoothly to the next one, improving overall coherence.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph sticks to a single clear idea to enhance coherence and make the letter easier to follow.
complete response
You clearly stated why you can't attend the interview and proposed a new date, showing your continued interest in the position.
greeting and closing
The opening and closing of your letter are courteous, which leaves a positive impression on the reader.
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