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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

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News
 plays a pivotal role in the society, to get know the breaking
news
, international
news
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newspaper
newspapers
 and digital media being a source of sharing the
intresting
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interesting
news
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people
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Nowaday
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,
newspaper
compan's
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company's
 perspective has been changed,
this
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persuades
 to share
irrelvant
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irrelevant
news
. Where some argue that
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 the
news
 should be in the form of
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objective
 rather than subjective.
To begin
 with, the main motive of the
news
 company to seek
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attention
 from
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public
, they create
contant
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content
 to stimulate
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curiosity
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among
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people
.
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Apparently
, to compete with other
news
 companies they are
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courageous
encouraged
 to share even flaw
news
. To
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exemplify
, these days, the layout and the
contant
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content
constant
 will
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differ
 from each brand of
newspaper
 organization.
In addition
,
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even though
 technology is replacing the
tradition
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newspaper
. Since it is more
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convenient
 for
people
 to read and watch
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instantly
. Most of the breaking
news
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 convey in dilemma. In
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, to gain their TRP rate they,
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telecast
 the
news
 which is
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 of mystery. The actual
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purpose
 of
newspaper
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the newspaper
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 is to update the daily information without adding or substrating the exact fact. They are supposed to
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prostrate
 in the right manner.
Furthermore
,
than
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 creating press
amoung
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among
 the
people
, share the exact view for the
publich
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public
 which will help the society to improve their knowledge.
For instance
, most of the school children are reading the
news
 to gain
the
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general knowledge. For
this
 case,
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content
 creators have to true to their content.
In addition
,
irrevelent
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irrelevant
 topics can be removed, like creating
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controversy
.
For example
,
people
 are blindly believing the
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 statement
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 and sharing it
to
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 their
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. To conclude, sharing
news
 to
people
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 thing, for their own shake, to
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sustain
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 is not the right way for a company.
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