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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

In today's world of globalization,
people
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 have many
food
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 options to consume. It has been a debatable issue whether hypermarkets should sell locally manufactured
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 of keeping imported
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items
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. In my opinion, it is completely the wish of the seller what has to be kept in his store and
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 depends on
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's demand. In
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 essay, I will be elaborating my opinion in an exemplary manner.
To begin
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 with, nowadays there are a lot of advertisements running on the media which are attracting common
people
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 towards buying them.
People
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 are ready to travel miles in order to get their
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food
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 on the table. If the supermarkets just sell the locally produced goods, there might be the possibility of not getting a proper response from the public.
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, there are some
people
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 who prefer to buy locally produced goods as they can be more affordable and trustworthy.
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, there are myriad organic imported
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items
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 available in the market. There is a great level of competition between different hypermarkets to keep a variety of foodstuff to maintain the standard of their store.
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, a family having 4 to 5 members have different eating habits. Some of them prefer having imported
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, they need not have to visit different stores to
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 their requirements.
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 to
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, there are many
people
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 who travel to different locations for the purpose of studying or work. These
people
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 will be joyful and satisfied finding their home country products, in
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 way they will not feel much homesick.
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, in western countries, there are many Asian grocery stores that have huge input of Asian customers coming in search of the goods which they use to consume in their homeland. In
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 way, they can feel connected to their roots in spite of staying in another country. To conclude, every individual should have their own eating choices whether to eat local or imported
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items
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.
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 to mention, it is the freedom of choice of the owner of the supermarket, to decide which
items
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 are to be kept in his store depending on his profit and income. In today's world, where a lot of
people
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 are migrating to different parts of the world, it is a good idea to have stuff from across the globe.
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 making the life of
people
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 easier.

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Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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