In a public-funded health care system people who are willing to pay for the best and fastest treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Health
care
is one of the vital sectors of any country. The government health
care
system is public aided by the tax they pay to the government, however
, it does not mean that any random person can pay huge fees in order to gain access to early and reliable treatment. I completely disagree with his thought and will be elaborating my opinion further
in this
essay in an exemplary manner.
To begin
with, health
care
in any part of the world should be easily accessible to common people as it is the right of the
every individual. No doubt there will be endless lines for the consultation of doctors at the government Remove the article
apply
setup
but it does not mean that those who Correct your spelling
set up
has
money should be entertained foremost. Only medical emergencies should gain priority and Change the verb form
have
rest
of them must be seen in order of appointments. Correct article usage
the rest
For instance
, I have seen a patient who was critically ill was
not admitted Correct pronoun usage
who was
in
the hospital and another person was taken just because he paid more money for the ICU bed. Change preposition
to
Unfortunately
he died at the hospital in few hours.
Add a comma
,Unfortunately
In addition
to this
, money should never be the reason in
compromising public Change preposition
for
health
. All citizens and residents should be treated equally regardless of their financial status. For example
, I have heard many people in many parts of world
had already booked the ICU beds in case of emergencies, ultimately leaving behind Add an article
the world
less
place for actually deserving patients. Correct quantifier usage
fewer
Health
Correct article usage
The health
care
system should always play a fair role in treatment
of society, which will help Add an article
the treatment
maintaining
the trust between doctors and patients. Change the verb form
to maintain
Nevertheless
, its
not doctors always responsible authorities at Correct your spelling
it's
high
level should be held accountable for the injustice.
To conclude, In my opinion, Add an article
a high
medical
system has a dignified role to play. Patients must be treated as earliest as possible irrespective of their financial situation and Add an article
the medical
this
enforced strictly in all the health
centers
especially in the Change the spelling
centres
public funded
.Add a hyphen
public-funded
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