Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
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a small
people
has been dedicating their time
to leisure activities. This
essay discusses some reasons why this
situation has developed and outlines some negative effects towards a person as well as in a community.
To begin
with, there are some reasons which may support that hobbies are not that common anymore. One of them is the amount of work the majority of people
are having and then
, they are usually requested to work extra hours per week. Due to this
daily dedication to their career, they might need to use the relaxation time
to finish their professional activities. Therefore
, they barely have free time
to devote to their hobbies on weekends, for instance
. Another important point is that people
usually lack time
management skills. This
ability is quite important if a person seeks a balanced life
,
because the majority do not know how to set priorities and Remove the comma
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hence
, they will not have time
to do what appeals them
most.
Unfortunately, the consequence of excessive work and poor organisation is almost irreversible, because they are difficult to identify and correct. Hobbies Change preposition
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also
contributes
to a meaningful Change the verb form
contribute
life
as it addresses to personal satisfaction directly. Once an individual does not feed this
internally, an unbalanced life
is placed and soon, a highly stressed routine. To illustrate that, more fights are happening in traffic
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a traffic
the traffic
jam
, because more Fix the agreement mistake
jams
people
are out of control and then
, influencing on a society
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Additionally
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a
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Thus
, a
local culture is being severely impacted by workaholic and disorganised Remove the article
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life
tendency
.
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people
, because they are working excessively and nurturing a disorganised routine. Several are the consequences to each individual and to the society, such
as unbalanced routine guided by meaningless stressed life
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