Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?”

Computer usage has increased in recent years among

children

. Some people opine that using

computers

are

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good for

future

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of

children

however

others consider that it may affect them negatively. In

this

essay

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we will discuss the merits as well as demerits of computer usage among

younger

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the younger

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generation and I believe that it is necessary for kids to learn

computers

but

overusage

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overuse

over usage

is harmful

for

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their brains.

Computers

has

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changed the world in a better way and more so in

the

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recent times for

children

. During the ongoing pandemic and lockdown lasting for more than a year schools and colleges have been shut and academics have taken a backseat. In these times educational institutions have started online classes for students to stay in touch with the subjects and

computers

have

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played a big role for kids to stay at home and learn.

Also

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the availability of internet services

have

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helped

children

to improve their general knowledge and skills.

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there has been

a

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abuse of

this

technology

also

. Most

of

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children

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the children

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indulge in playing games, watching movies which

has

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decreased

there

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attention span.

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with everything accessible on

internet

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they are falling prey to bad content like pornography and fake news. Increased screen time has led them to

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in physical activity with

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in obesity and early onset of diseases in kids. In conclusion,

computers

has

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been boon to

this

generation and at the same time bane

also

. In my opinion parents and teachers have a big role to play in

this

by educating and helping them.

Thus

in my opinion learning

computers

are good if utilised well .