Some people believe that unpaid community services should be compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving tge neighbourhood, or teaching children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Doing social
work
carries highest
regard in every society. In fact, I believe social Change the article
the highest
work
without wage should be mandatory
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a mandatory
part
of high
school curriculum for two main reasons.
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the high
Firstly
, students
should be able to share social
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the social
burden
as they are young and energetic. These Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
community
projects do offer a vital chance that students
can avail and
actively take Correct pronoun usage
themselves and
part
in resolving community
issues. Physically and mentally they have capacity
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the capacity
charity
tasks. Take some laborious work
for example
. Students
can work
together for the cleanliness of their neighbourhood through scheduled patrolling and collecting garbage. Although
, I concede it can be a daunting and boring job specially
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However
, I would argue that schools give numerous scholarships to their students
and in return
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charity
work
would not be a huge favour to ask for. In the end
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,end
Therefore
, they must be encouraged to take active
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an active
part
in charity
programmes offered by the schools.
Secondly
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the civic
students
. Ultimately these traits shape personality
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the personality
students
that affect their future. It is this
mandatory charity
work
that triggers responsibility in students
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also
experience closely
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a closely
community
. For example
, when high schoolers are asked to spend quality time with senior citizens at old homes, students
get a wonderful opportunity to have an insight of
elderly life. Older people tend to suffer from loneliness and depression and Change preposition
into
this
way young people can play sports or watch movies with senior citizens and give them a few moments of joy and happiness. Moreover
, students
will know not everything one does is for the money. In fact, many times it is an essential act of kindess
expected by the society they live in. These social services can be a window to that kindness and empathy for young kids.
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community
services provide greater opportunity to share social
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,
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but,
also
evokes a strong sense of empathy and kindness among younger
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the younger
Therefore
, I agree unpaid community
services must be mandatory
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a mandatory
part
of high
school curriculum.Add an article
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