Some people believe that unpaid community services should be compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving tge neighbourhood, or teaching children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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regard in every society. In fact, I believe social
work
without wage should be
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part
of
high
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school curriculum for two main reasons.
Firstly
,
students
should be able to share
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burden
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as they are young and energetic. These
community
projects do offer a vital chance that
students
can avail
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actively take
part
in resolving
community
issues. Physically and mentally they have
capacity
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to complete assigned
charity
tasks. Take some laborious
work
for example
.
Students
can
work
together for the cleanliness of their neighbourhood through scheduled patrolling and collecting garbage.
Although
, I concede it can be a daunting and boring job
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without any financial reward.
However
, I would argue that schools give numerous scholarships to their
students
and in
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a few hours of unpaid
charity
work
would not be a huge favour to ask for. In the
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it is student's civil service skills evolving and their neighbourhoods getting clean.
Therefore
, they must be encouraged to take
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part
in
charity
programmes offered by the schools.
Secondly
, it evokes empathy, kindness, and
civic
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a civic
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sense among
students
. Ultimately these traits shape
personality
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the personality
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of
students
that affect their future. It is
this
mandatory
charity
work
that triggers responsibility in
students
.Not only do they become aware of social issues around them
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they
also
experience
closely
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a closely
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knitted
community
.
For example
, when high schoolers are asked to spend quality time with senior citizens at old homes,
students
get a wonderful opportunity to have an insight
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elderly life. Older people tend to suffer from loneliness and depression and
this
way young people can play sports or watch movies with senior citizens and give them a few moments of joy and happiness.
Moreover
,
students
will know not everything one does is for the money. In fact, many times it is an essential act of
kindess
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kindness
expected by the society they live in. These social services can be a window to that kindness and empathy for young kids. In conclusion, not only do
community
services provide greater opportunity to share
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burden
,
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but,
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it
also
evokes a strong sense of empathy and kindness among
younger
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the younger
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generation, without seeking financial benefits.
Therefore
, I agree unpaid
community
services must be
mandatory
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part
of
high
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the high
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school curriculum.
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