Some people believe that unpaid community services should be compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving tge neighbourhood, or teaching children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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regard in every society. In fact, I believe social

work

without wage should be

mandatory

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part

of

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school curriculum for two main reasons.

Firstly

,

students

should be able to share

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burden

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as they are young and energetic. These

community

projects do offer a vital chance that

students

can avail

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themselves and

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actively take

part

in resolving

community

issues. Physically and mentally they have

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to complete assigned

charity

tasks. Take some laborious

work

for example

.

Students

can

work

together for the cleanliness of their neighbourhood through scheduled patrolling and collecting garbage.

Although

, I concede it can be a daunting and boring job

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without any financial reward.

However

, I would argue that schools give numerous scholarships to their

students

and in

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a few hours of unpaid

charity

work

would not be a huge favour to ask for. In the

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it is student's civil service skills evolving and their neighbourhoods getting clean.

Therefore

, they must be encouraged to take

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part

in

charity

programmes offered by the schools.

Secondly

, it evokes empathy, kindness, and

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sense among

students

. Ultimately these traits shape

personality

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of

students

that affect their future. It is

this

mandatory

charity

work

that triggers responsibility in

students

.Not only do they become aware of social issues around them

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but,

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they

also

experience

closely

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knitted

community

.

For example

, when high schoolers are asked to spend quality time with senior citizens at old homes,

students

get a wonderful opportunity to have an insight

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elderly life. Older people tend to suffer from loneliness and depression and

this

way young people can play sports or watch movies with senior citizens and give them a few moments of joy and happiness.

Moreover

,

students

will know not everything one does is for the money. In fact, many times it is an essential act of

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kindness

expected by the society they live in. These social services can be a window to that kindness and empathy for young kids. In conclusion, not only do

community

services provide greater opportunity to share

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burden

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but,

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it

also

evokes a strong sense of empathy and kindness among

younger

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generation, without seeking financial benefits.

Therefore

, I agree unpaid

community

services must be

mandatory

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part

of

high

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school curriculum.