Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this.

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that people ought to donate a fixed amount of their money to assist

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idea would surely be acceptable to most people for several reasons. I will explain them in

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essay. One of the biggest

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a donation

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is that it helps to decrease poverty

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the world. There are different non-profit communities that are focusing on different burdens.

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of them have the goal to reduce poverty by helping those who live in underdeveloped countries.

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The donation

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will support

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to buy essential things for

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. The recent survey shows that deprivation has been reduced over the

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few years because of the

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and

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.

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, many animals and plants are endangered.

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is surely our duty to protect

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deforestation is leading to many

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environmental

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as global warming and desertification. By giving the

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, forest and habitat will be protected by the

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and non-profit

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that work for

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and animals.

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, one of the

organizations

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that protect

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has already planted over twenty million trees all over the world. It seems that

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doesn't have to be

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amount of money. By

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we mean that donating small

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money

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of money

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to

organizations

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will help them to make changes for poor people and animals. It might be said that

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helps

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with their problems, but it doesn't

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figure

out the causes of that problem.

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, in recent years

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and non-profit

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have been trying to figure out the causes of the problem. To conclude, it seems that contributing to

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may lessen poverty and it supports

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society in different ways.