A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and they should have same rights as human . while othere believe that human must emoploy animal to satisfy their various need including uses for food and research . Discuss both the view and gve your opinion.

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rights as

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.Others argue that it is better to employ them to satisfy various needs including food and research .In

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in conclusion. Based on my knowledge , some

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rights as

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feeling and pain .

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is essential for

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of nature and earth.Nowadays, many

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used

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in transportation

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who try to hunt them.

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food in terms of milk and meat.

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believe that

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of protein and important

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of

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body.

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association of the USA over 60%

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suffering from malnutrition because they are not getting cow milk and these

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just because of killing

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for personal use .

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are at the level of distinction. Having gone through the matter

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some detail it can

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that ,

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are hunting

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for their personal use but it should

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in mind that milk and cheese are good for health and without

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human life span is not possible.