Some people think that in the modern world we are more depend on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, to be
independence
or rely on Replace the word
independent
Add an article
the network
a network
network
are raging on: some Fix the agreement mistake
networks
people
assert Use synonyms
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
are
one of the Change the verb form
is
part
of society so that we become more Change to a plural noun
parts
depend
on each other ,but Replace the word
dependent
the
other Correct article usage
apply
people
may not think so. I my view, modern Use synonyms
life
Use synonyms
force
Fix the agreement mistake
forces
people
to be more independent compares them to the past.
Some Use synonyms
argues
that Change the verb form
argue
people
become more independent due to the fast development of Use synonyms
the
modern society. The development of technical products and facilities lead our Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
life
are less inconvenience now than in the past. Replace the word
lives
For example
, Linking Words
people
can chat rather than face to face chatting with anyone by Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
smartphone
smart phone
and can engage in a meeting online no matter where you are. Correct your spelling
smartphone
In addition
, because of the fierce competition, Linking Words
people
will be more anxious about their work or study performance and afraid to left behind the other competitors. Use synonyms
People
will not have much energy to consider Use synonyms
about
the relationship but focus on endless pressures. The Change preposition
apply
overly
competition Change the adverb
over
make
them be more independent and indifferent.
The other Change the verb form
makes
people
may think that Use synonyms
the
modern Correct article usage
apply
life
Use synonyms
need
cooperation which may bring more benefits. Change the verb form
needs
First
, cooperation can bring more opportunities and potential economy by collect the different sectors and professional staffs together which may turn the sparking originality into a developed idea, and bring potential business. Linking Words
Second
, depending on others may help the individuals to narrow the gap of opportunities to Linking Words
success
. Replace the word
succeed
Such
as the talent director who Linking Words
are
passion on his or her career but lack of huge subsidies to make the dream come true can rely on the person who can Change the verb form
is
supported
him or used the social platform to search the other chance from the Change the verb form
support
people
overseas.
In conclusion, I think Use synonyms
the
modern Correct article usage
apply
life
Use synonyms
provide
multiple choices than before, cooperation may benefit Change the verb form
provides
to
work or team building but it will Change preposition
apply
brings
more potential pressure which forcing Change the verb form
bring
people
to Use synonyms
facing
more complicated problems than before so that they have less time to consider Change the verb form
face
about
the relationship and needed be more independent.Change preposition
apply
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