Report: Fewer and fewer young people are interested in working as a teacher. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

Being a

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is no longer the

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choice for many young

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in recent years. I believe that the price increasing and internet advances spreading state-wide are the main reasons for

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situation. The

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reason why

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people

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being a

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is that the poor salary. As a growing price in many aspects

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their daily life, the low income of a

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may prevent them to join social activities, like dating with others or joining some parties. And some of them need to reduce

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expenses to pay off debts and buying a house to form a family. It will affect

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mental health

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and reduce the quality of their lives. That’s why many young

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chose a well-paid job to lead a happy life rather than a steady one. The

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reason is the advanced internet that brings more opportunities and challenging than before. Young

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can attend

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immediately with their colleagues abroad to discuss a project or even handle their work in

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public transportations using their smart devices by

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. That means more flexible work hours and forms to the young

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of teaching

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in the class and repeat the same content over and over. I guess the multiple forms of work and flexibility may cause the young

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to escape to be

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teacher

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. I think, that measures should be taken to solve those problems by

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.

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, give

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job more benefits and improve welfare services. Like, prolong the time of summer vacations to teachers and maternity leave of young couples.

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, it will give them more time to enjoy their life and experience more in the world.

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, tax reduction and rising salaries in teaching may narrow the gap of salary in teaching and other jobs so that it can attract more young

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to be a

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to

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suffering some dangerous job to raise

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. In conclusion, young

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are less to be a

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due to the inflation of prices and internet advances, which drive some young

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away. If the providing in pay and giving more obvious benefits to the young

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will settle the problem.