Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The child age is the most important stage of every

person

's life. some believe that the fathers and mothers should teach good behaviour to thier's kid but others think that the

school

is the

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best

place to learn these kinds of all behaviour.

However

,

this

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the

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following

reasons.

To begin

with, certainly, the parents should be taught

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the child

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how to be

good

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person

among society because they have more experience and more knowledge as compared to babies.

In addition

, the guardians can only know about their babies qualities

hence

they can only change any habit

instead

of

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a bad

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habit.

For example

, in Indian modern mothers should teach how to behave and respect to opposite gender

thus

, rape case reduces dramatically than ever before. The fathers and mothers should be taught how to be a good

member

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in

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society and the parents have more rights and duties of will grow a best man in

this

community.

Conversely

, the

school

is teaching everything about our life

such

as how to behave and how to become a wonderful

man

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.

For example

, in many developed countries

school

has started moral studies from kinder garden

consequently

, they have

behave

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a good

person

.

Moreover

, the

school

is not only teaches

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academic syllabus but

also

teaches

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moral value. To conclude, certainly, the parents should be taught to their toddler how to behave respectfully among

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but

school

is the best place to learn everything which is what we want.

However

, in my opinion about

this

, both the fathers and schools have equal responsibilities to teach to their toddler will become a good man in

this

state.

Furthermore

, both are the key responsible

person

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duties.

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hope

this

trend is conducive to the

next

generation.