Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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's life. some believe that the fathers and mothers should teach good behaviour to thier's kid but others think that the

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is the

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,

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the

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following

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with, certainly, the parents should be taught

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how to be

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among society because they have more experience and more knowledge as compared to babies.

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, the guardians can only know about their babies qualities

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they can only change any habit

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of

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habit.

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, in Indian modern mothers should teach how to behave and respect to opposite gender

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, rape case reduces dramatically than ever before. The fathers and mothers should be taught how to be a good

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society and the parents have more rights and duties of will grow a best man in

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community.

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, the

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is teaching everything about our life

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as how to behave and how to become a wonderful

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.

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, in many developed countries

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has started moral studies from kinder garden

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, they have

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a good

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.

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, the

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is not only teaches

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academic syllabus but

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teaches

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moral value. To conclude, certainly, the parents should be taught to their toddler how to behave respectfully among

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but

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is the best place to learn everything which is what we want.

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, in my opinion about

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, both the fathers and schools have equal responsibilities to teach to their toddler will become a good man in

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state.

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, both are the key responsible

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duties.

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trend is conducive to the

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generation.