In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good, while others believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an increase in
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population
in the world. Some are of the opinion that
this
is beneficial for the country
however
others consider
this
as not useful.
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essay will discuss both
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views and in my opinion
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in
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population
is not good for the nation. The increase in
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the percentage

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of senior citizens is disadvantageous for
progress
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of the country. The young
population
are involved in productivity and
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the relative decrease of
this
population
will affect negatively. According to world bank
statistics
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many countries including
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Kingdom the average age of the
population
is on the higher side and in these
countries
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there is a fall in the economy.
Also
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the elderly
population
are
burden
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to
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as most of them will require increased access to health care.
On the other hand
, the experience of the elderly age group individual should be utilised by the youngsters to move forward overcoming the difficulties faced
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them. Most of the corporates have started
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program
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for
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of
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the young with the experience of the elderly. Overall, in
conclusion
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though the growing elderly age group hinders the growth of the nation, it can be beneficial if the government and the corporate
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their experience for the betterment of the society.
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