Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Child life is the best part of every person's life undoubtedly and in
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the school life
also
gives the same feel.
However
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some
believe that the teachers have more
influence
than parents when the child enters school. I strongly agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, certainly, the tutors
influence
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guardians because the toddler can spend more time with
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their teachers than mothers
hence
, they can easily
influence
.
For example
, one of my neighbour
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says his teacher who Mr johnson is his
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model even he studies only kinder garden.
In addition
, many kids are enchanting
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their's tutors dressing sense, character, and way of talking
consequently
, they sometimes behave like their professors.
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among students due to care, love and support. Even the
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their family
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members
even though, they will expect from
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such
as professors.
For example
, we can see that many children dream job is
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teaching
preaching
because they inspire and enchanting with to their tutors that's why they tell.
In addition
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choose
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their future career
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which is teaching and the reason for their enchanting with their coacher. To conclude, in the above-mentioned details can clearly
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the coacher
influence
to their students as compared the fathers. I hope
this
trend is conducive to build a
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society in order to many coachers will build.
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